Sinking ship

Sometimes love doesn't stink but sinks..

When love comes, it is like a ship that is about to sink, but the diamonds stay afloat...
They glisten brightly mimicking the clusters on the moon...
Sometimes the diamonds sink along with the ship....
The darkness cast the love down to nothing...
All there is left are the tides covering the sorrows of a lost lover.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A hard tone for the emotion of love.
"The darkness cast the love down to nothing...
All there is left are the tides covering the sorrows of a lost lover."
I'm old. Love changes. True love is a lifetime together with one person and our children. I liked the honest thoughts leading to sad ending.
Coyote

[AYVID N]

A very beautiful poem on the unpredictable fate of love. Appreciated so much...

[Writeforlovely]

Thank you! I look forward to reading your work too :D

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Writer you're superb with your words. Keep floating with your words.

[Writeforlovely]

Thank you so much! :)

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Beautiful imagery and voice of passion!

[Writeforlovely]

Thank you so much :)

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

What if the path you chose becomes a road, the love you wish becomes your home, the wind is high and the pressures on, ill send the rain, wherever we end up. Because I am the wind in your sail.

[Writeforlovely]

Lovely addition! Thank you :)