Struggles and divinity

Struggles and divinity

A Poem by Writeforlovely
"

We all go through this.

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I'm fighting and kicking,

leaping and giggling.

The struggles of life

it can be divine or lack luster and shine.

Finding your way with a lion as your

teacher, you attack and tear,

relax and repair.

I have to be reminded of what it means

to be hopeful.

I get lost in the pain and back

and forth juggles.

Between joy and sadness, I feel both.

Which one I define as myself...

that I don't know.

© 2016 Writeforlovely


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I enjoyed this very much. It reflects the way I feel much of the time. Especially appreciated the line 'Finding your way with a lion as your teacher, you attack and tear,relax and repair. and having to be reminded to be hopeful... especially in these bleak times.. thank you for posting..I look forward to reading more.. write on..


Posted 7 Years Ago


Life is filled with ups and downs. Those who learn to ride the roller coaster knowing things are ever-changing are the ones who are least stressed. Good write. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


This was so easy to read and understand and enjoy. The line that stands out the most to me would be, "Between joy and sadness, I feel both." Made me realize I had never before wondered at how our brain was capable of feeling two contradictory emotions nearly simultaneously. Nice work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Writeforlovely

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind reviews, Rana. I am really happy to know you enjoy reading my work :.. read more

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Added on July 29, 2016
Last Updated on July 29, 2016
Tags: life, pain, struggles, relax, joy, sadness

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