Rain is like love

Some poetry is best kept short and sweet. :)

Sunset made you just for me.

You make me excited for a sunrise.

Sunset made you into my perfect dream.

You're brighter than the fading colors.

You're someone who sparks a spring in me.

You are calm like spring rain.

I am healed like droplets with a gleam.

How refreshing you are to be.

Reviews

[Gee]

Hi, enjoyed this, very calming. (A couple of your should be you're I think.)

[Writeforlovely]

Oh, thank you! I fixed the grammar mistake. Glad you enjoyed it and relaxed you :)

[Tomoe Tellez]

I liked it from the first sentence, it just seems so mesmerizing. You've got really great descriptions here in comparing elements to love. Great job! I give this 100 points!

[HippieSoulPunx]

Beautiful, short but not simple; delicate, peaceful words that contain so much love and beauty. Nicely done :)

[Writeforlovely]

Thank you for your wonderful review. I'm thrilled that my poetry has been received well to you.
read moreThank you for your wonderful review. I'm thrilled that my poetry has been received well to you.

Much love,
Xoxo