She

She will never know the life she could have

she will never know the lives she touched

Nor the the lives she saved

But what she does know is what she stands for

 

she knows she is lucky

with the problems she has

she will stay tough,

Even though she feels weak

 

She wont always know what to say

but the words she says

Can make the trapped feel free

She will stay strong for you and me

and will fight the horrable disease

Author's Note

This is about a girl that stays strong even though she has depression that will laugh with her freinds and hide her true emotions. she does what she can do to try to make sure ohers don't feel the way she does.
yes I know it's not perfect

Reviews

[samurai212]

great job :D

[AquaWriter]

This is the first poem so it will take me a while to become good

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A curiously reliever piece, full of emotion and pure angst.

[David Michael]

No, it's not perfect. But then, neither is "she". And that's part of the point, perhaps. I think it all fits.