What's trending?

I could hear the silver clanking in my pockets

I reached out for it

your dirty face, hungry lips,
lonely eyes

it could've made your day

but I stopped

I'm sorry,
kindness wasn't trending

Reviews

[Wild Rose]

Ah yes!
How often have we decided to make a donation - Then at the last minute changed our minds

BUT then having seen a flash car pull up and parked - the occupant change from smart clothes to well worn ones; rub dirt on their faces, then go round the corner to beg?

Or the flash car pull up take some ready prepared painting out > Go and sit beside a previously parked banger a begin painting

All is not always as the look to be

[Zoya]

So true! There's corruption everywhere.
Thank you for your words here. Much appreciated! :)

[andrew mitchell]

Great write, flowed smoothly and an air of sarcasm indeed lol esp the last line.

[Zoya]

Thank you so much for the read and review! Means a lot :)

[andrew mitchell]

You are most welcome.

[Najam Us Saher]

Whoa. Hard hitting truth you have shared here Zoe.
Now a days there is trend for injustice, fraud and cruelty. Kindness and humanity seems rare.

[Zoya]

Yes, Najam. Thank you very much for your time and review! Means much :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.
Did you submit the story yet?

[Zoya]

Oh yes I did :)

[Najam Us Saher]

So happy to hear :)
Which story did you submit?

[Zoya]

This one :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Great. Do tell me once the results are out.
When are you expecting it?

[Zoya]

I really don't know, Najam. But I will tell you :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes do tell me :)

[wordman]

well this is the season,but i guess kindness should always be in season

[Zoya]

Definitely. Thank you so much for your time, wordman :)

[wordman]

you`re welcome zoe

[¿]

Huh! Thank you,.....for the kick ;)
Everything's trending these days.... except kindness! 'twas a good read :)

[Zoya]

Glad you liked it! Thank you so much, Tahsin :)