The Death In Me

8-23-09

Discarded mountains

devoid of emotions

surround valleys

stripped of joy

interweaved with

red rivers of hate

that have bled dry

cold as a statue

inside and out

the ones who

made me

walked away with

no regret

not staying to see

their empty creation

try to make its way

in a world of feeling

knowing it could

never survive

Reviews

[Lunar Lightning]

You know, you seem to have a lot of hatred built up by whoever hurt you. Damn it would suck to be them right now (jk jk). Anyway, this is very good. I love how you write. So full of your emotions and every word screams out what you're feeling. Personally I'd say it's pay back time for the people who hurt you, but that's just me. Keep on writing.

Luna