Always Waiting...

8-2-09

waiting for the touch
that tells me you love
waiting for the words
I know I won't hear
waiting for the time
when my life will begin
waiting for the look
of disinterest to wane
waiting for the spark
that used to be there
waiting in limbo
for the anger to fade
waiting for the night
so I can escape

Reviews

[Asabrand]

Good imagry, cadence, and flow. I've been there.

[J Carly]

This one spoke to me on such a deep level. I can completely understand where you're coming from here. The piece has a good flow. And I'm a big fan of prose, so I don't mind when things don't rhyme. It was clear and concise, and painted a vivid picture. And it's not just because I've been there, either. Well done.