Fancy Dreams

A secret smile

a quiet laugh

a pale flush

stains my skin

your hesitant touch

I do accept

so it begins

this unexpected fantasy

taking away effortlessly

my bored reality

I will close my eyes

and fall again

into the waves

until it ends

Author's Note

let me know if it doesn't flow smoothly for you...I kept rewriting it but I do like it

Reviews

[Evil_Angel]

It flows perfectly, it is such a pleasent poem to read, also very romantic. I love the first three lines, and when you say it stains my skin, awesome like leaving an imprint. Great job :) I owed you for all the reviews you gave me!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow... a nice little fantasy, very soft but seductive write... I like it a lot.