Depression

I actually wrote this yesterday along with three others in a state of depression.

Spiraling out of control

into unknown oblivion

falling into the darkness

as my nails scrape the walls

looking for something

worth holding onto

nothing can save me now

not even the soothing

musical sounds

I would welcome pain

but all I feel is numb

My mind won't focus

I just want to give up

forget my life

and crawl into my head

where I'm comforted by the black

Reviews

[Emza S]

Amazing. I've tried to write something like this, but I totally failed. You did so wonderfully. Keep on writing!