Gloom

obviously I wasn't very happy in highschool...lol

Shadows in the darkness,

light is becoming less.

Whispers in the shadows,

from whom we do not know.

Your voice is but a whisper,

in this gloom and despair.

I hear you breathe a sigh,

are you thinking we might die?

The world is dark and gray,

no one has much to say.

Is this how we're to be doomed,

sitting alone in the gloom?

Reviews

[Emza S]

I really don't even know what to say anymore. I really do love this poem, I just ran out of words. =)