Unforgiven

Lies, lying deep inside

memories of all the fights.

Unforgiven, words unspoken

dying, dying life's our token.

Time is up, say goodbye

there there, now don't you cry.

Reviews

[Amy Carrington]

This really DOES sound like a refrain in a song...you should turn this into a song. It would rock.

[Emza S]

You know what that sounds like to me? Lyrics in a song. Like, the chorus? Really good work. Happy Writing!