Not Fair...

Not Fair...

A Poem by ape domenigoni
"

the end of something that never begun

"

It's not fair that

 she's in my place

hearing your words

filling your desire

when I'm the one

who's on your mind

filling your thoughts

from so far away

where you wish to be.

It's not fair to

make me ache for you

then toss me away

so you can move on

to somebody else

while I'm forced to stay

in my dark lonely world.

Melancholy moods

hit me more often

without you to talk to

and brighten my days.

I hate you, I want you

I miss you, I crave you

It's not fair...

© 2008 ape domenigoni


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Wow, that was deep. Keep on writing, you're doing really well.

Thanks so much for the review btw.

Oh, and Welcome to the Cafe!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ape domenigoni

11 Years Ago

Ha, I'm 4 years late, but thank you :) I never realized I could comment on reviews

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