There will be a tomorow

There will be a tomorow

A Poem by floarealbastra10

Forget my pain and sorrow

The ache will dull by tomorrow

Yet how can I forget

My heart's deepest regret

How can I go on?

When my sorrow's played out in every song

The words are there in my head

I can't go on like this, not to the end

I've got to break free of this thing

Once more lift up my voice and sing

For yes there will be a tomorrow

Another day to forget my crippling sorrow

For when night ends

Morning sunshine brings.

© 2010 floarealbastra10


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"I've got to break free of this thing
Once more lift up my voice and sing
For yes there will be a tomorrow
Another day to forget my crippling sorrow"

i love it--and yes-
another tomorrow-
and another poem:)))

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love this. How vividly you portray the pain we have in our hearts yet we know deep inside that we need to find a way to let go because there IS hope and there WILL be a tomorrow.... Excellent piece... I think this will make it into my favorites.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Yes, there is always a new day to good forward, released from the agony that you have share so beautifully! I hope peace finds your heart, so that you may move forward, never wasting a second of every day! Nice write F.A.B. ~ Judi ;-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like the logic in this poem. Life can be a pain in the butt. We must overcome a lot and hope for a better day tomorrow. A very strong poem. I like the ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is good. I like it, it feels a bit annie though...maybe that's just me, but it's a good poem

Posted 14 Years Ago



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