Daydreaming

Sitting here by the window wonderin why?

Precious days are going by

And I am lost in a deep haze

Feeling like I have fallen in a maze

My life is full of broken dreams

MY thoughts, my writing all it seems

to twirl deep into my mind,

till I cant stand it, a lonely tear I wipe from my eye

As I wonder of the possibility

Of beeing me.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Daydreaming leave us wishing for great dreams and different endings. I like the feel of the poem. The self-searching leave us thinking too hard. We must hold on to our goals and desires. Can't allow the world to take away our wishes and dreams.
Coyote

[Mauricio Montoya]

nice work

[Dupree]

This is another good poem. Your a quite impressive poet. Your poems are relatable and your wording is perfect. Your form isn't half bad.