Perfect Storm

Powerful hard form
moves in like a storm
embracing me warmly
one with life,
finally
sweet dream inside me
where I can be free
easing my body and mind
as hot chills go down my spine
and drops tender as dew
penetrate me and you

Reviews

[J.S. Pua]

short and effective writing..
good work..

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"sweet dream inside me
where I can be free
easing my body and mind
as hot chills go down my spine"

{wow--you are very talented with imagism--i love this}

{i love thunderstorms and you painted one beautifully...truly great poetry..}

james:-)