Dreaming Entity

A humorous little tale.

I wonder if immortality can be achieved?

Why would you want it I have enough crazy thoughts to make me insane by 22 what happens at 22,000? I'll be an over achieving divinely enlightened prick trying to destroy the universe to stop my own craziness that's why immortality doesn't work unless you have 7 dragon balls to circumvent the atrocities that follow. Something somewhere probably has achieved this feat.

So I guess on the 7th day somewhere, "He" created a world in which mythical beasts of epic proportions were brought forth into his creation where light was good and created all. From this light a small entity crept forth in the form of a hallucination. It felt a sense of loss and hopelessness because he knew not from where he came. He journeyed through this world of light in search of one ultimate goal purpose. He met a leprechaun. He was promised a pot of wealth. The hallucinogenic entity asked "will I find purpose in this? The leprechaun told him "what else would purpose be in a world of lights if not to acquire all the lights you possibly can?" He soon found out leprechauns were bullshit. Next he came across a Pegasuses. Who told him of tales of how flight could make him forget the hallucinogenic lights that plagued leprechauns and other mythical creatures doomed to walk a life through vain greed. He asked the pegasus "would he find purpose away from everything inhabiting this world in which he knew not how he arrived?" He soon found out pegasuses were bullshit. Next the little hallucinogenic entity came across a wizard. The wizard told him "to find purpose first he must wake up." The hallucinogenic entity's world soon turned to white and he was traveling up out of this world and saw a dark light at the end of the tunnel and when he hit that darkness the entity awoke to the sounds of an alarm clock thinking "that wizard was on to something."

Author's Note

A humorous story I wrote one night bored. It isn't meant to be too serious. Just a story of an entity wandering a world of lights inhabited with creatures meant to portray certain things in life. Like work=leprechauns drugs=Pegasus wizard=self. As in no one can wake you up to what you have to do but yourself.

Reviews

[SquinklaPsyOps]

You have done a great job of writing.

This is a very compelling and interesting piece, well written with a strong, clear voice and easy to read. I definitely think with the right illustrations you catch the readers attention.