I've wrote enough to get over you, but i can't

I fell in love with half of you

 

and when anyone mentioned your name,  i smiled sadly. 

beucase i knew i could only love a part of you

 

i could only be with a part of you

 

i loved half         of you

is that    wrong?

it tore me up inside enough to rip my heart    in half

torn betweeen

 

the kind of person i am and my own afffection that was only yours

 

i was oil and you were vinegar. 

 

you- exciting and dark

showing me your sour, strong world

 

and i-

smooth and flexible,   useful for many things and put wherever needed

 

 

we collided so abruptly that my oily fingers could

barely touch your hands made of

acid

and the bubbles floating between us were as                                       close                                          

 

as we got

like every mix of the two,     we didnt

 

but i wanted to so badly

oil                         and vinegar

just close enough to touch but                             far                        enough away to feel like the distance

would make my

lungs

collapse

 

so i blew oil bubble kisses

and wished

i was 

vinegar. 

-c.s.

Reviews

[Marcel Grant]

That was really good. xD Loved the illustrations.

[Cool Girl]

Omg I loved this so much! It's going in my favorites!!! I'm Aless btw! Hope we can be friends :)

[closed]

this was kool
the metaphors really worked for it i think

pulled together with strong sentiment


-Dream

[Jamestown]

Well written!
I like the unique description you give for the two of you:)
This should be s piece several will relate too, I know I can:(
There has been that connection with someone for whatever
reason that only equals half your heart, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem made me smile.
"so i blew oil bubble kisses
and wished
i was
vinegar. "
Very nice use of words. This is what poetry support to be. Entertaining. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jesse]

There is spirit in your writes, at least I connect with what you say. I enjoyed it cause it struck a chord with me as well.

[flickering candle]

thank you so much, that means a lot to me:)

[Jesse]

I just joined....haven't been in a group in a long time. I can tell you that one can tell a person by their writes....I dearly believe that the spirit one leaves in words is quite alive. :)

[flickering candle]

thanks thats really cool :)