rianfall

 

rians falls softly dawn

Quietly, slowly,
A fluid snow-wall
Falling in a silver curtain
From the sky,
Like leaves tumbling from the towering trees,
Softly, softly, not making a sound.
It's a soothing scene.
The world is hushed,
Watching, waiting, wordlessly-
The world is at peace

Reviews

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

pretty bad vocab and spelling
A re-write is necessary