BORN IN YOUR BREATH

BORN IN YOUR BREATH

I see you.

Delicate curves of your
wanton smile part
to reveal the insatiable
dance of your tongue.

I pull you closer.

Your breath ascending
from the heart, dripping
honey, unclothing a bite
of lustful craving.

I embrace you.

My mouth seizing yours
with the moist of my lips,
burning back the fire
inside of you.

I taste you.

My tongue unfolds into
a song upon touching yours,
quenching my thirst
with your love.

I adore you.

Reborn in the breath
that lingers upon
your lips beneath
passionate eyes.

Author's Note

Awarded 2nd in the following contest:
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/So-you-got-what-it-takes%3F/12510/

Thank you for feedback should you leave it :)

Reviews

[Inkcognito]

The title is to die for - simply sublime!
I love the way you start this poem - "I see you" - such a beautiful, simple introduction but, you 'see' deeper, you want more ...I love how feelings, sensations, emotions follow, dressed in lust, sultry passion and tender sensuality...thoughts, like a trickle of honey poured onto smooth, warm skin, slowly making its way, leaving a lingering, sweet trail. (ohhhhhh...I could sooooo do with a kiss like that right now!!) Tantalizing, vivid imagery....YES! a super fabulous write!

[lyssilou]

The imagery is amazing like always, I had just realized that you are really good at writing thesse sensual poems. Kepp up the good writes!

[Alana Michele]

I love the passion here, very real. Great read!

"dripping
honey, unclothing a bite
of lustful craving." is my favorite line

[Poetic Beauty]

This poem flows nicely and the you make the kiss such a magical heart melting knee weakening one. This is the way everyone wants and should be kisses.

[Brianna Brie]

Breathless......

[Linear]

Wonderful sensual and tactile poetry, well written Ivan 7 points

[G. K. Bostic]

This took my breath away. Sensual, delightful!

[casablancavic]

Very deep

[Valentine]

No feedback...I am going to give my honey a big kiss..Nice one..sets a mood I can tell you..Kathie

[vido.]

this poem just, puts you at an awe. the formatting fits ideally into your poem.