BALLET OF EMOTION

BALLET OF EMOTION

Lace your shoes and
pull up little ballerina,
come pirouette on
the pink florets.

Let your feet grace
the sun-kissed petals,
as you dance on
the illusions of flight.

Your movements
in adagio, exquisite -
stirring my feelings
to heavenly chimes.

The ballet of emotion
in my eyes, skipping,
twisting and turning
to your every brisé.

My heart palpitating
to the unsung symphony,
upon which you spread
your wings...my graceful angel.

Author's Note

This is written based on the display picture and for Cheyenne's contest found here,
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Beautify-Me/11488/
***Winner of the said contest.

Normally I don't draw words from pictures (I don't consider myself good at it), but I made an exception in this case :)

Thank you for the feedback should you leave it.

Reviews

[Michael X]

precision and solid consistancy you've pulled out all the stops to make this
poem the best it can be, the words are alive, and never settle for less.
you like to write in double couplets i say double because you ephasize the
line breaks with your punctuation perfectly at every second line in each

stanza, its the little things tha make good writing stand out in big ways, like perfect punctuation and speaking general on forms
which this form is usually a rhyme form, but you take it to another level,
push the envelope, is excatly what poetry needs nowadays

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

wow with a ballet flow too, and it captures enough to feel the wanting or admiring of the dancer, well done

[Natalie]

This was absolutely beautiful. Wonderful and description!

[Brad]

this poem was a ballet in and of itself, great work

[c.m.]

Okay, so I love this poem. The title is just wonderful, and I love the words you've created from the picture.

Let your feet grace
the sun-kissed petals,
as you dance on
the illusions of flight.

Bravo, love. Amazing.