____ Common among all ____

Trying a Haiku for Brie's contest

 

 

A superstition

 

or conviction

 

whispering softly to a candle

Reviews

[Celtic Cat]

Ah! I love this! How brilliant and clever (and yes I know brilliant and clever are the same...but, but, my brain...well...let's just say it's seen better days!!) : )
This is so great.....I am floored. Completely. No really, someone should come by and pick me up, dust me off maybe??? So, so great, I'm faving it. so there!

[closed account]

very nice!!!!

[Helena]

I understood those brief words completely and I liked the undertone of this. Well done.

[Melanie Jane Boicourt S..]

Wow! Your poem has a similar theme to my own poem that I entered.
Good job!
Love All, Mejasha

[Touché Armada]

Nice, I have this vision of that little tiny flame flickering all over the place like its being poked with pins and its trying to get out of the way... Oh mannnn, I need to so check my head space LOLOLOL

[April Child]

Wishing and hoping. Nice I like very much, the image of whispering into a candle. Good luck with the contest.

[Brianna Brie]

Awh, here is one that is profound and deep. Nice take on the whole birthday thing. Thanks for entering my contest and making my birthday special.

[None]

I really enjoy your style and how you can make something flow so well with just three tiny lines. Wonderful writing!

[Red_Queen]

Wow. i dont know if the poems you rwiter are just total bullshit you writeout of no where. or if they are very deep and you actually put tons of thought into them.
i would hope the latter because it would be quite dissapointing.
I am so interested in your righting now.