____ Change ____

 

 

 

 

 

I admitt i have been thinking wrong
Of life 'n death, of world n' wealth
Of now 'n then, of fath 'n fate
Of sorrows, joys, love 'n hate



That selfish thought, that agonised touch
The world gave me, had done so much
But now i changed, and the change is true
A change that's given, by Thee, and you.

 

Reviews

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Life is a developmental process. None of us were born with all the answers. You make your mistakes, learn from them, and grow old and wise. Wonderful write!

-Gabe

[Pema Dorje]

oh yes the change of Heart that gives us birth anew, where all our sorrows and pains are wrapped in dew, and now we walk with kindness stirred in evey step we take, and realize that all the Love you give is all that you can make ... lovely write

[Brianna Brie]

You place change in a favorable light here. Loved the simple shortness of this piece that still was able to speak volumes of wisdom.

[Celtic Cat]

Oh, I LOVE this!!!! It's so great to embrace the changes, and I hear you about your "before" state. So easy to slip into....
The ending is just great, you revealed your inspiration! Wonderful!

[Middagslapie]

Very spiritual indeed my good friend! Very much so... thanks 4 sharing!

me**

[April Child]

Change is good but not always easy. Life is so much about perspective and choices and how we choose to see and that seems to be what you are saying here. Nice.

[The Random Writings Of ..]

Change is always hard, but yet we must do so. For the good, to grow and to learn. This very spiritual as lydia wrote. Speaks of courage and hope. Great write :)
Kates

[Lydia Shutter]

Seems to be a spiritual write. Perhaps you found religion? I like the rhythm and rhyme of this poem. Lydia