My Bestfriend

Write me a story she said
Write me a poem she said
Give me your words she said
I told her to kindly f**k on or off me
Wait those were her words.
That I was repugnant and didn't stand a chance
I didn't actually say that, they weren't my words
I left those in the subtext, you know between the lines-
Of texts you never read,of cries for help you never heard.

Write something on my wall she said
Write it on my arm she said
I wrote your name on my heart - till the eraser ran dry
While I slept somewhere between in love and scared street.
They're the same place really, not much different.

Return me my autumn darling, and I will write you a love poem
Something that you probably don't deserve.
See I only ever wanted to tell you how I feel
in someway more intimate than the clicking of keys.
Because in my opinion your the last good thing in this town,
and I don't give a f**k if you can stand to live without me.
I would just like to hear it float in a note from your lips.

Once. - That's all I need.

Maybe were just a cheesy pick-up line away from never talking again.
Paint an empty canvas white and tell me that's what I mean to you.
I'd understand.

Write about how you feel I said
Write all the things you want her to hear I said
No I said, I could never.
But that's just what I did.

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[caesarkreshen]

I was looking over my friend list and thinking of deleting strays and leftovers. I saw your name.

This has lines I really like in it and other times it seems overdone.

I really like "Write something on my wall, she said, write it on my arm." (Although I wouldn't have said she said again.)

I really like "return me my autumn, darling, and I will write you a love poem."

I think this could be shorter, but I don't think it's bad as is. I tend to live off of good lines. Two is a lot.