Homegrown Blues

Homegrown Blues

A Poem by Kadie Tee
"

Mama's callin' me home...

"

 

Well,

 

There is a sound I know

Like my mama’s voice:

Sweet and sincere,

Swayin and a swingin’,

Rockin’ her baby to sleep.

 

This sound has a beat;

A rhythm that holds no lies.

Slow and sturdy,

My mama’s a hummin’

Causin’ my heart to weep.

 

The solo guitar;

Rough fingers a pickin’;

As tears flow, fillin’

the bottoms of brown bottles,

My mama’s a cryin’,

Cryin’ herself to sleep.

 

Harmonicas and harmonies,

Narration of my soul;

She needs me,

I need her.

Blues and brain are in too deep.

 

Well,

 

I’m leavin’ these blues,

Walkin’ away from soul

‘Cause my mama’s a callin’,

Callin’ me home

Across this wide city sweep.

© 2008 Kadie Tee


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my mamas not quite that person i would run home to...but i like this blues-y feel...makes it seem like some front porch concert on a saturday night with the neigborhood at your feet. Music is a melody, lyrics a concept...

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this could be a blues sound about the blues! I don't suppose you sing or play guitar huh? Well, if you do, this reads so well that it could be a song. You really get down to the heart of what the blues is as a concept, it is a spot on match. Love the "mama's a callin".

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

this skips playfully. i enjoyed it.. my mama's callin' me home...

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Kadie Tee
Kadie Tee

The Slums of Monte Delentino, MI



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