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Oh how surprised and proud

And Indulgent

We appear, despite our better judgement

As you splash your black paint - War like- onto my canvas 

Disturbing images slip through the bacteria clogged filter of your "mind" 

Demanding Flattery

This, as usual, is given

this, as usual, is given,

Fueling your inner narcissist 

But in spite of our constant praise 

You are not a God, not a man, not a human, 

But a parasite 

Inhabiting a shell of skin  

Reviews

[Minoru Kusari]

I like this poem as well. It has a very true message that I felt I could relate to (Unless I just happened to interpret it wrong). I like the bitterness and venom of the language. Heheheheh...

[Alex Zynder]

i like this piece. its original, and shows a hidden emotion.
keep writing with this style, you will see better and better pieces.