the song of no one

the song of no one

A Poem by flameinthesnow
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Day 3 NaPoWriMo

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Last night's sliver moon
challenged me to meet
myself in the room,
yet no one was there.

The trees' bare branches
flow like braided rivers
to the changing sea
of the empty sky.

If I were a bird,
and my voice were song,
I'd trill to the dawn
with the forest mob. 

© 2017 flameinthesnow


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I like the birds songs, It's sings in my ears and i never share my tears, to hear the song of my lungs, and there never be none.

Posted 7 Years Ago


flameinthesnow

7 Years Ago

Evermore and anon, songs are sung to the sun. :)
Mae Owens

7 Years Ago

THAT'S THE TRUE AND I FEEL THE COOL AIR GOING DOWN MY BACK,,, WHEN I SING A SONG THAT'S TOUCHES ME W.. read more
flameinthesnow

7 Years Ago

Oh I love you! :)
Lovely imagery. Graceful flow. Really nice work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

flameinthesnow

7 Years Ago

Thank you kindly for stopping by.

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Added on April 3, 2017
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