War

It all starts in the end when we pass out crying,
nobody living, nobody dying.
Screw the voices we hear in our ears.
It all began with blood and tears.

Author's Note

I know it's not much to review, but please try to tear it apart.

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

Not sure "starst" in the first line is correct. I think "started" was what your brain wanted and your fingers did not deliver. Happens to me all the time. Nice write. I like short verse and this is well done.

[Sadang]

thank you, yes. i actually meant "starts"