Time

IDK

Time is slipping

Slipping 

Slipping

Time is nothing 

but the rush,

only falsified

It never was

Never will be

Never has been

Nonexistant

Past

Present

Future

Time is fleeting 

Repeating

Stopping

Time is imagined 

made real

only by the mind

Reviews

[jesserose99]

oh, my goodness...couldn't tell certain people this because they might debate until the cows come home...but I have had an experience I think very similar to this. I could definitely relate...but it is still a very different poem. Very nice work. Totally agree. Very well expressed, was nice to see it expressed.

[MeratheRestless]

What is time? Your simple but fascinating poem answered that.

[silverwritinggoddess]

Very well-penned. This is a very good way of expressing a concept of time. I like how you say it's 'fleeting, repeating, stopping...' This was really cool.

[ANTO]

This is cool Sadang. The abstract concept that rules our lives laid out for all to see. I liked the strikethrough of the word 'Time' - showing further the author's disdain for the whole issue.
Nicely done.