another one of my terrible poems

another one of my terrible poems

A Poem by fitz Roberts

One more of my terrible poems
I figured why not write will you read ?does my words complete your soul will you really read and think damn I am really turned to a new person with deep thoughts?
Who knows maybe my words Will touch you and you'll be born again maybe find more love for your spouse in the end
Who cares really did you read ?do hope you enjoyed it hope its what you need I just want to know did you make it this far or really I probably lost you in the first bar.
To rant to rave carry on complain maybe you have have disdain did you feel it turned you insane?.who knows did you like the poem it frobally blows cuz I made it rhyme.
OH HE'S SO cliche can you belive he rhymed that way.so what who cares never again I'll never dare.s**t my bad I really can't help it damn it.ill just stop cuz rhyming won't get me to the top.........Ok OK
I know I see I didn't know what poetry was supposed to be.i just write you can judge if you hate that's your grudge it just happens not mean too don't be mad you can't do it too.
My writers I love my fans of course critics please feed me your hate so I can write fck you in force.my wit is great but I love it when you hate it's more for me to eat on my plate.

© 2014 fitz Roberts


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fitz Roberts
Just having fun

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Added on June 22, 2014
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fitz Roberts
fitz Roberts

warner robins, GA



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I like to write hope you enjoy how I paint a picture with words 27 you old male hoping to be a decent writer Lol more..

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