Back N 4th

this was written by 3 people.

 forward facin with the blues slowely swayin away, 

you took the wheel i popped a pill and slowely started to fade, 

we can't pass the pain with these two stripes so

we turn the foglights on and follow closely behind,

you use to be a lion but today the engine roars.

the pain beats through the backseat speakers

while the windshield wipers run dry, 

recent cracks distract the passenger,

who steadily laughs as life passes by

not quite aware and not quite awake

it's hard to see through eyes half baked

stuck to the seat , the oklahoma sun steadily beats

-n-  the hint of mended dreams permeates 

-n- makes the skin between your jeans sweat,

windows rolled down as wind whips in ,

im one step from forgotten and

 my fates rests in this engine.

memories flash by like mile markers,

fresh blue skies, and oppurtunity awaits,

i choke them back, but we will never leave the mistakes

behind in our eyes, we ride incognito,

emotions a politically correct disguise,

our title's expired needing to be inspired.

left alone with only breaklights...

Author's Note

this was written by me and two other people exchanging lines to create a story

Reviews

[Avery James]

I love it when we write together. We could do a lot more poems! I have a couple that we wrote together on mine too. :)