butterflies

 

flutter, fly, flit from flower to fern

skillfully skitter till petal settle

plainly pale or prissily patterned 

genteelly grace Gods’ garden glory

Reviews

[S]

very creative use of alliteration & the clever use of sounds feel like they mimic the butterfly's delicate moments. Very nice.

[eglantine]

Yeah for alliteration!!!!

[Wondering Mind]

Very nice use of technique and words.

[Helen Crutchett]

There is something magical about butterflies and you have painted a beautiful picture here with your brush. ~ Helena ~

[Lily Mae]

My walks in the woods lately have allowed me to see a few here and there. You have described them and their delicate beauty very well.. x

[Ed Hart]

other creatures might eat them, but we're the only to put pins in 'em and frame 'em so they'll stay put on the walls