sliced pie
A Poem by
James Paulin
economies
are
dichotomies
with
prosperity
beside
poverty.
drastic
inequities
generate
enemies
from
insecurities
humanities
incompatibilities
are
incongruities
or blasphemies,
defying
deities
generosities
unequivocally
© 2015 James Paulin
Reviews
Wonderful use of words! They all fit, all make sense, tell a story...cleverly.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
there are wisdom in these words. amazing rhyme scheme. succinct. excellent poem.
Posted 12 Years Ago
there are wisdom in these words. amazing rhyme scheme. succinct. excellent poem.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
some ideas are hard to divide up but these fews words have done just that.
Posted 12 Years Ago
some ideas are hard to divide up but these fews words have done just that.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
it's the primate substrate critically massed
Posted 12 Years Ago
it's the primate substrate critically massed
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on March 21, 2012
Last Updated on May 1, 2015
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James Paulin MI
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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are ..
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