Absolutes

Absolutes

A Poem by James Paulin

 

 

 

 

darkness or light

condition

power and fright

submission

blind or insight

cognition

error to right

contrition

weakness to might

commission

black to white

transition

 

© 2015 James Paulin


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wow, this is good, have had the condition, sometimes submission, pretty good at cognition, slow at contrition still no commision ...sort of grey zoned most of the time. You took some very profound truths and with a stroke of the brush the signpost was up. Thankyou.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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You bring forth a great deal of thought for the reader with so few words. The emphasis on black to white was a great addition.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, this is good, have had the condition, sometimes submission, pretty good at cognition, slow at contrition still no commision ...sort of grey zoned most of the time. You took some very profound truths and with a stroke of the brush the signpost was up. Thankyou.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very bare, but executed fairly well. Good work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

acorn to oak
fruition


Posted 13 Years Ago



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James Paulin
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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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