one to spring

one to spring

A Poem by James Paulin

one to spring

 

robins everywhere

tulips unfurl from their grave

ice drops in chizzle

© 2011 James Paulin


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This is such a lovely write. Enjoyed this Haiku!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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love the tulips unfurling, creates a warm image of spring escaping' winter

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I love haikus. I love the imagery in the poem too, particularly the last two lines.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh, what a sweet picture, spring yawning awake. Love the word--chizzle.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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James Paulin
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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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