Ideas

Ideas

A Poem by James Paulin
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Rictameter

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fragile

nurture with care

noble, small or wistful

beware ready critical glares

cradle, noodle, wangle, wrestle, wiggle

ignore all odious compare

persistence is crucial

remain aware

worthwhile



© 2011 James Paulin


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An excellent philosophy to put into practice. There is a great balance in this, from form to thought, and sounds. It looks like it was a fun write?

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the noodle. How do you make the flow so right? I could never write something like this and make it work... I would be tweaking it until it was exhausted and lying flogged, bound and gagged on the floor. Oh well.

Arrows.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

everything comes to mind in the form of an idea...every thing

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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