I want to write a poem tonight. I'd quite like it to have the effect this one had on me, to someone else... a smile, a slight chuckle and an underlieing gnawing. You have 17 words... I shall attempt to do it in under 70. :)
This is beautiful, brings a smile to my face! Fascinating how symmetrical this is in form. The topic is well done and makes me feel all warm and fuzzy! Who doesn't like a hug?
After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..