Yes, I used to do mediation work and that is absolutely central. Again, I love the structure of this poem. Giving each new word a seperate line ensures we focus on every single one.
I'm tempted to mention the possessive apostrophe but then that would make a simple beautifully crafted thought so messy, wouldn't it? My favourite line from a song is 'give me back my point of view' - your poem here connects with that for me.
After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..