harmony

harmony

A Poem by James Paulin
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6 word poem

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one

persons

opinion

considers

others

too


© 2011 James Paulin


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Yes, I used to do mediation work and that is absolutely central. Again, I love the structure of this poem. Giving each new word a seperate line ensures we focus on every single one.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm tempted to mention the possessive apostrophe but then that would make a simple beautifully crafted thought so messy, wouldn't it? My favourite line from a song is 'give me back my point of view' - your poem here connects with that for me.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah!how dogmatic we can be at times..putting labels on people..how can we know the life lived by another..
Clever and razor sharp in terms of precison.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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