Pop It
A Poem by
James Paulin
white
yellow
caramel
buttered with salt
Cracker Jacks with prize
microwave bags rise
hot air popper
stove top pan
kernels
ouch
© 2010 James Paulin
Reviews
The use of the three colours at the beginning "white, yellow, caramel' allows the rest of the poem to concentrate on sound, what a masterful idea, I love it!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Very tastey poem you have here! The imagery was great!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Very tastey poem you have here! The imagery was great!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I can easily smell this hear this...love popcorn and all its fixing's especially this time of the year!
Posted 14 Years Ago
I can easily smell this hear this...love popcorn and all its fixing's especially this time of the year!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
We don't have the hot caramel popcorn over here. It has been a source of resentment with me for some time :) Lovely sounds, James.
Posted 14 Years Ago
We don't have the hot caramel popcorn over here. It has been a source of resentment with me for some time :) Lovely sounds, James.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I could realy pictutre this as I was reading I love popcprn hehe
great write.
Posted 14 Years Ago
I could realy pictutre this as I was reading I love popcprn hehe
great write.
:-)...the popper the better with butter!
Nothing compliments a movie better than a bowl of freshly popped buttery popcorn!
Posted 14 Years Ago
:-)...the popper the better with butter!
Nothing compliments a movie better than a bowl of freshly popped buttery popcorn!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on December 18, 2010
Last Updated on December 18, 2010
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James Paulin MI
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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are ..
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