the dreamer
A Poem by James Paulin
 WOTD "susurrus" 
his songs luminous
lyrics echo, susurrus
to ingenuous
© 2010 James Paulin
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I like these so much!
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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A beautiful poem which really captures the lyrical/musical power of dreams
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Remarkable Write! So creative
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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A radiant murmur of creative brilliance!
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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sibilant sing song
susurrus chorus for us
all our souls porous
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on December 8, 2010
Last Updated on December 8, 2010
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James PaulinMI
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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..
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