Paradise

Albert's Poetry Cafe ~ 'TOVLI'S TEN'! "An advanced 10/40.

not far away.

 

this desolate place

has only pretty birds

                                to face

 

 

      high above

 

mundane musings,

through trough of thought,

heaven crawled in

 

aquamarine ocean

peaceful

           easy

                   sleep

 

 

go in

                 on gray days

or when

outer is out

                     of control

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

Very nice take on the "Ten" contest. Thank you for submitting this poem. I am finishing this contest off for Tovli. There was a technical hitch. Helena

[Sel Whiteley]

A good poem that captures the scene of paradise. I agree that all paradise needs is the ocean and birdsong. Love the format to this and the use of alliteration and colour, brilliant!

[Tovli]

lovely poem! nicely done. tovli