Decembers' First Slash

bitter cold freeze flash

snow flakes whirl, swirl, hurl and dash

temperatures crash

Reviews

[Sel Whiteley]

There is such an immediacy and energy to this poem (over a third of the words in the haiku being verbs: daring and effective), you really capture the feeling of something crashing, particularly as you omit the fullstop, masterful.

[Inkcognito]

Sounds just perfect for fireplace, marshmellows, red wine and cuddling-up...
Enjoy!

[Nobody.]

made me even colder than I am sitting on my porch. lol!
good write. nice images of snowflakes dancing.
cheers!