hesitate

hesitate

A Poem by James Paulin
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WOTD " palpitate "

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senses titillate

anxiously anticipate  

heart rates palpitate

 

© 2010 James Paulin


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This is great, full of lots of motion and emotion!

Posted 14 Years Ago
oh, the palpitate
into which we gravitate
by the second date


Posted 14 Years Ago
not much hesitation in this rhyming alliteration senryu. Crafted!

Posted 14 Years Ago
three lines and yet more than everything

Posted 14 Years Ago

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 Added on November 8, 2010
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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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