Common Assault

Common Assault

A Poem by James Paulin

serve greed

profits to exceed

justify taking risk with need

full speed

compromise wisdom's costly lead

all creatures suffer misdeeds

earth bleeds

© 2010 James Paulin


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Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Congrats on this great winning poem. Well Done!

Posted 14 Years Ago
Great rhyme and wonderful social commentary. I really like this piece. Well written and well said.

Posted 14 Years Ago
nicely stated

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you have your heart on the pulse of it, my friend

Posted 14 Years Ago

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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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