Grab A*s

Grab A*s

A Poem by James Paulin
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Grab A*s

 

Horseplay.

Boyhood foolin’ round

wrestlin’ an’ laughin’ happy sounds.

Joyful ways,

Rollin’ an’ tumblin’ soft green ground.

Testosterone is soon found.

Young days

© 2010 James Paulin


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Wow... I must say, I saw the title and I was immediately intrigued and needed to read this poem. It sounds so playful and fun... I love the way you dropped all the "g"s it sounds so natural and guyish. Your simple description really brings the imagery to life. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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this is not what i thought the poem would be about from the title :)

nice job on it though

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

They used to tell us in Navy "Hey, you guys cut out that grab-assin'!" I don't THINK I ever grabbed anyone's a*s, but it sure was fun. Yeah, you captured it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow... I must say, I saw the title and I was immediately intrigued and needed to read this poem. It sounds so playful and fun... I love the way you dropped all the "g"s it sounds so natural and guyish. Your simple description really brings the imagery to life. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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James Paulin
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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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