Fry Pan

TETRACTYS POEM

Fry Pan

 

Debt

Job threat

Wife upset

No breakfast yet

And I used a hammer on the omelet

Reviews

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Got a good chuckle out of this one..Don't know if that is what you wanted or not...Let your day be filled with inspiration to overflowing and offer us some great poems to enjoy..Thans for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

[Christina May Shanaberg]

I must be sick, as well, because this made me chuckle, too! Well done!!
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[alesuriko]

haha! Nicely done sir. This is funny indeed. I loved the hammer bit.

[Seashell]

I bet,
She did fret,
When the omelette.
Was set,
On the carpet....

haaaaa..oh sorry.

This is fun....Thanks

Babs xx

[Austin]

I liked this piece of writing. Thank you for submitting it into my Contest!

[Wicahpi]

thank you for the laugh this morning!

[Ferg]

it's the way things are lately, isn't it?

nice tetractys!

[Ed Hart]

Fret
Regret
House sublet
She took the bet
And then I steam rolled over Babbitt

[Kristin Brecoe]

hahahahah. thanks i needed a smile. as saddening as the story is, it was fabulous and made me smile. =]