Gorilla

Gorilla

A Poem by James Paulin
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Cameo

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Weather

absorbs ticks with talk.

Look away or dance or tip toe.

Distractions

camouflage self altered egos.

Monkeys thrive behind flowers.

Disrobe

 

© 2010 James Paulin


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Wow, this definitely made me giggle. The imagery... nicely done. It's so intriguing... my mind is still laughing at the monkeys and for some reason it feels like "Disrobe" is said in a sarcastic yet inviting or mocking voice... I'm not sure how to describe it, my imagination is weird. But this is a great poem. I really liked the alter ego. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow, this definitely made me giggle. The imagery... nicely done. It's so intriguing... my mind is still laughing at the monkeys and for some reason it feels like "Disrobe" is said in a sarcastic yet inviting or mocking voice... I'm not sure how to describe it, my imagination is weird. But this is a great poem. I really liked the alter ego. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ohh. I enjoyed this. What were your intentions behind it?

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fascinating Cameo!


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was brilliant. many selfish monkeys with a typewriter and the others are busy with their tedious details.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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James Paulin
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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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