Awesome

Haiku

 

the whole universe,

forces, matter and spirit,

exists to serve Love

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on this great winning poem. Well Done!

[alesuriko]

Interesting, very cute and purposeful. Nice statement.

[Sasha]

You packed a lot of power into a tiny haiku. Interesting how something so small can explain the purpose of something so vast. Of everything, even. Well done.

[Sara]

wow, simple and profound... love how you capitalized 'Love', perfect touch.

[Ed Hart]

awesome threesome...I think, you couldn't say this if you didn't know this...

[Nameless]

Perty good.

[Wicahpi]

I'll 2nd that!

[Ferg]

awesome :)

[Not A Writer]

by Love do you mean God? Anyways good job.