green

green

A Poem by James Paulin
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TETRACTYS POEM

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go

pine bough

envies’ show

pistachio

energy efficient, safe, sufficient

gardeners thumb, cash sum, Kermits’ aplomb

positively

broccoli

parsley

pea

© 2010 James Paulin


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haha, as i sit here typing on my metallic green laptop, listening to my metallic green ipod, i can't help but think green is such wonderful color --- hey, it's *life*, man... love all the allusions here, each one is so great and unique ('kermits' aplomb' takes it for me though lol)... and 'go' is such a great starting word to use, literally (bad pun, but i couldn't help it :P)... great job, lovely ode to my favorite color

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haha, as i sit here typing on my metallic green laptop, listening to my metallic green ipod, i can't help but think green is such wonderful color --- hey, it's *life*, man... love all the allusions here, each one is so great and unique ('kermits' aplomb' takes it for me though lol)... and 'go' is such a great starting word to use, literally (bad pun, but i couldn't help it :P)... great job, lovely ode to my favorite color

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

doesn't it say, if you would be happy for a week take a wife; if you would be happy for a month kill a pig; but if you would be happy all your life plant a garden? I like your playfulness, engaging and very funny.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great use of the Tetracty form. Congrats to you!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am GREEN with envy over this piece of writing! Nice job!!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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