Our Baby

Contest (Waltz Wave)

 

 

 

Far,

away,

on

big clouds

ideas

soon die.

In

thought waves,

bright inklings

come free wheeling,

so near in

distance.

Up

above

Earth waiting,

they sat,

not

making

sense.

 

 

Reviews

[angelina neves]

lovely and tender!

[Helen Crutchett]

Wonderful submission Jim. I really liked the flow of this. Well done!

Helena

[Gandré]

this was sweet. I like the thought waves. Then tell me why is this world running on high frequency thought waves?

[NM Sarah]

Wow. I was very touched by this. Poetry that makes you feel something is the point as far as I'm concerned.

[Phibby Venable]

i love the way the ideas proceed to illumination. wonderful work.

[Raivenne]

Nice use of the challenge words.

[Ferg]

Interesting challenge.......I love such challenges and I tried it myself too.
Thanks for the inspiration