In

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When do we first begin?

Explanations seem thin

We know we live till not,

Talk about souls a lot.

If spirits have no end

Instead of start, think send

How we change, evermore

Birth and death, nevermore

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

The enlightened heart shines the way for the mind. This is a beam of that light.

[Emily Quinn]

short and sweet, a great message being the main subject here. I guess each reader can get something entirely different from this poem; interpret it in their own ways. For me, I feel it is about ignorance of our own life qualities.

[Ferg]

neat idea......."receiving" from another life and "sending" to the next life.....the ultimate emailing experience!

(just don't hit the "delete" button or you may end up in the trash can)

sorry...work does this to me :)

[Ed Hart]

clever, true, tight, smart, knowing...